I'll give this a shot. >:)
I'll give this a shot. >:)
dont do dis mate :)
Musically, it could use some variation during the verses instead of the same two tone bass line throughout.
Lyrically, there are some moment where some words could have been shortened to keep a better flow going. I'm not saying the flow was bad, it just could have been better with certain other words.
Otherwords, I'd buy it. Good job.
Word... Thanks for the feedback, man
It's like I've awaken up from being knocked unconscious. What are these gates in front of me...
Awaiting part 2.
Interesting thought :o
Deshiel: "Perhaps you guys could tell me why was this so porly recieved. Especialy in comparison to my other fl slayer tracks."
Actually, I could answer you here. Your slayer guitar isn't noticeably filtered properly. It sounds more to the stock sound. You also have a bit of.. uh, lack of better term; oversampling/clashing with the reverb on the slayer sound itself. The standard filters like the parametric 2, the FL distortion, the FL overdrive plugins that come already with FL Studio are something you should dab into and see if you like the sound when you toss slayer into it. Also, stereo expand it. It really sounds monoish. Sorry for the late response.
VX
sorry for the late response and thanks ;)
Diversity.
It's like; Reverb, 8bit sounds, reverb, echos, reverb, drumkit, distant reverchos, chaotic melody. Of course, it's decently blended and arranged in a neat listenable pattern.
Also, I'll get onto you about that fadeout ending. It was premature. Take your time on releasing shit.
Diversity: yay
Drumkit: That's not my drumkit lol read other reviews
Chaotic melody: Not sure if this is a compliment or a complaint
Decently blended: Is it just me or have I upped my mixing game without realizing it? Like, by a lot?
Fadeout ending: Welp, can't say I didn't see it coming.
Take your time: You mean, like, 3 months per track? D:
Thanks for reviewing! I appreciate feedback :3
I love the way you took this. Eventually with the remakes I've done with this melody, it works best with a somewhat creepy yet the good creepy (if that's possible lol) feeling.
This actually inspires me. Thank you for this. :)
Thanks for the review, dear Vultyrex! I did my best to create a dreamy atmosphere like with the original.
By the way, while this was being put together, I got carried away and made a full version.
Well done. I like this remix of sorts. Very sleek and the beat is an extra nice touch. Good job!
:o
Thanks, most calm songs do well with breaks :p
I'm not totally digging the attack cuts but I can totally sense this going into an intense drop of some sort. Perhaps a build up suspenseful one.
This will definitely be a giant track when it's finished. Thanks for the review!
Also I can see what you're saying about the attack cuts, the space does sorta throw you off and leave you confused but I find it rather interesting to use
Very Good.
You've decided to leave out the ambiance like I did in my version. However, I did notice a few missed notes and stuff but no biggie you don't really notice them. Take a listen to my version called Another Shore and maybe you'll like the style I did it in too.
Thanks for the comments. This song actually almost got me banned back in 2008. The admin must not have believed in remixes being allowed on the portal or something, yet loads of remixes come onto the portal everyday and become very popular. Since then I've stuck strictly to making my own original work. But I might start doing some remixes here and there to have some fun, plus you can learn alot by working with the music of these great composers. Also, I listened to your song, it sounds great. It adds a much more original touch than my version. Great job.
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